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Monday, June 26, 2017

Killer Angels

Killer Angels


I was hoping you could look over my query. Feel free to post it on your site if you wish.
I offer the warning in my sidebar because an honest look at what an editor is thinking while reading a query is often NOT what people want. Indeed, some authors queries are like Roy Schneider dangling red meat over the side of a boat.

Information, however, is power-- and more power to all authors!
Dear Editor,

For seventeen-year-old Nicola Summers, finding her boyfriend Tristan chained to the driveway after being mugged by a street gang was not part of the plan.
No kidding, really? That wasnt part of the plan?

Something "wasnt part of the plan" is a terrible cliche in queries. Still, we might forgive it if its used acceptably--this isnt. This is akin to saying "Being enslaved by alien Elvis clones was not part of the plan." I think I can safely say that no one has EVER planned for this.
Beaten and knowing the rain is underway, he rejects Nicola’s help.
What? The rain is underway? What does that mean?
Determined, Nicola tries to liberate him, but when the rain arrives and hits his kin, she witnesses the impossible: out of thin air, Tristan sprouts wings.
Oh, you meant "on the way" not "underway". (And I assume you meant "skin" not "kin".) But that sentence would still have been confusing even with the right phrase in it.

"Out of thin air" is another cliche. (Was it really out of thin air? Or... was it out of his shoulders?)
Consumed by an animalistic instinct to protect his identity, Tristan attacks the person he holds most dear and nearly ends her life.
That is not what "animalistic" means.
But after the encounter with her winged-monster-of-a-boyfriend, Nicola’s not sure who to trust with the information—who would ever believe her?
The people who see the bruises? Wounds? Angel dust?

Which makes me wonder, how does he nearly end her life? He didnt try to drown her in a puddle, did he? There must be marks?
She can’t decide whether to pack her bags and move with her mother or finding him.
I know this kind of verb tense inconsistency is an easy mistake to make when youve rewritten something a lot, but it makes it look like you dont understand grammar.
When she seeks answers with the help of her best friend, Tara, Nicola finds herself near a truth that is more terrifying and heartbreaking than anything she imagined.
Just "near" the truth?
First, Tara reveals she is Tristan’s sister.
That doesnt sound terrifying or heartbreaking.
Second, Nicola discovers she is only alive because Tristan unconsciously chose her as his soul mate.
Neither does that. Kinda creepy and stalker-ish, though, since how in heck can she not have a say about who her soulmate is?
And third, he’s dying.
Ah, thats the heartbreaking part, I guess?
Tristan elected staying in his human form
Another verb/grammar problem. For editors, one is a typo; two is Highly Worrying; and three is Oh Hell No.
to prevent his kin of angels from seeing his memories and killing Nicola for what she knows. But how is Nicola supposed to save him when he is dying to save her? TITLE REDACTED, a YA fantasy novel is complete at 90,000 words.
Since when do angels kill people for knowing about them?

We in publishing are getting pretty tired of paranormal romance, including the recent sub-trend in angels, but we do generally tire of trends much faster than the reading public, who are less aware of them.

So you may be able to sell this, even though its not clear whether youre doing anything markedly different from Hush Hush and Fallen (etc). But this query needs to be clearer and much better proofread, and Im guessing your novel may need those things, too.

Good luck!

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Sunday, May 28, 2017

Killer Snake v1 07 APK Download

Killer Snake v1 07 APK Download


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Challenge the worlds most dangerous snakes in this game of dare and fast reflexes!



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  • Compete using 6 Leaderboards.
  • Challenge 5 deadly Killer Spiders.

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Friday, May 19, 2017

Killer Waves 2016 Watch Online Full Movie Free HD

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Movie Director Name -: James Balsamo
Casting In Movie -: James Balsamo, Phil Anselmo, Chris Mulkey 
Released -: 16 July 2016 (USA)
Country From -: USA
Language Used -: English
Genres seems -: Horror
IMDb Rating -:  Warriors Gate (2016) on IMDb

Plot: Beware the Unholy Diver. A slasher is killing surfers to make a human flesh surfboard. Detective John Holster is on the case, working day and night to solve the strange disappearances of people and the stranger appearances of body parts washing up on the beach.






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Saturday, April 22, 2017

Killer Escape 3 Walkthrough

Killer Escape 3 Walkthrough


Here is the step-by-step walkthrough solution to the Psionic Game: Killer Escape III.  This is the 3rd episode in the Killer Escape series.  Warning:  This game contains scary scenes - not suitable for children.  This guide will help you escape... alive.  If you need more help or detailed explanations, then please request using the comments section below.  You can play Killer Escape III here.

About Killer Escape III:  This is a point-and-click room escape game.  You need to find and use objects to help you escape. There are easy, medium, and tough puzzles that you will have to solve.  Killer Escape 3 is a medium-difficult room escape game that should take you between 1 and 2 hours to solve.  Killer Escape 3 is easier to solve than Killer Escape I and Killer Escape II.

The Killer Escape story:
Previously, you woke to find yourself confined in a cell battered, bruised, and confronted by a psychopath.  You managed to blwo up the boiler and kill him.  Then you were knocked out only to awake under the dental tools of a sadistic killer dubbed "The Tooth Fairy".  In making your escape you beheaded her in the elevator doors.  The elevator climbed a few floors only to grind suddenly to a halt.  Now you must climb the elevator shaft and discover what fresh horrors await you in this twisted place... All you can hope for is a way out!  Good luck!

Killer Escape 3 Walkthrough starts here:
You start your escape adventure in the lift shaft.

Climb the lift shaft.

Climb up to the big metal door with some kind of locking mechanism.
Zoom in on the lock.

You will see scratches on both the bottom left and bottom right side.  That will be the clue to opening the lock.  On the left you should see the top and bottom are marked.  On the right the middle of the 3 circles are marked.  So slelect the top and bottom lights on the left and the middle light on the right.  This will open the lock.

Enter the darkness.
After the quick animation... Enter the darkness again.

Everything is clean... nothing to do but to move forward.

Zoom in on the touch screen panel on the right.

You have only a small number of seconds to get this right.  Match the bottom row with the top row, then hit the middle-right button.  When the timer runs out, it will reset the top row and you will have to start again.  If you were quick enough you can exit the panel and the forcefield will be gone.

Move forward.

Move to the shadow area.  Then enter the locker on the left.
You can climb out of the locker when you want to... You will be caught.

"I was taken by those things and transported elsewhere.  I slept for a while experiencing extremely vivid and weird dreams.  I dont know how long I was unconscious for but as I began to come around I heard them communicating.   They talked in an unknown language for a time, until suddenly I began to understand them.  I could tell exactly what they were saying!  I overheard something about my implant operation going smoothly along with other more distressing things.  I waited patiently until it was quiet and risked opening one eye.  Looking around I saw thaty those things had left me alone for now... It was time to act... Time to escape!


Get up off the bed.

Zoom in on the case and open it.  I got it open by hovering the mouse cursor left-to-right over the blue circles.

Take the red crystal key and the microscope slide inside the case.
Zoom out.
Turn around.

Zoom in on the microscope on the table in the right.
Insert the microscope slide into the microscope.
Zoom in on a cell.  Click on a moving cell and then keep the mouse cursor over it until it zoom in.
Then insert the needle at the correct angle - the bar on the left will be white.
Click on the big abnormal area:

Now you have DNA (DNA 1) strand extracted from the cell sample.

Open the case on the right.  Same process as the previous case.

Take another crystal key (orange one),  the battery, and datapad 2.
Read the datapad and notice the Datasphere code.  Mine is 9930.
You can also read the DNA printout in your inventory.

Open the case on the left.
Take the second battery and another microscope slide.

Extract the DNA (DNA 3) from the slide using the microscope as per the previous slide.

Zoom in on the floating screen.
Enter the code for the DATA - the code you saw on the datapad.  9930 for me.  Notice that the 4 and 9 look very similar.

Exit the screen and enter the DATA room.

Break the camera at the top by clicking on it.
Enter the data ball in the center.

Watch the sequence how the 4 sides light up.  Repeat the pattern and the ball will open.  If you get it wrong, zoom back then zoom in again to retry.

Read the 4 messages.  (The font the developer used is not very readable,  Sorry about that)

Go back to the operating room.
Look under the bed.

Take the slide.
Use the 3rd slide on the microscope and extract the DNA (DNA #2).

Zoom in on the exit door and break the camera.
Break the camera at the Lift Door.

Zoom in on the area between the Exit and Silo door.

Zoom in on the center then take the green crystal key and Datapad 3.

Read datapad 3 to get the silo code.  Mine is 9 2 1 5
Go to the screen and open the Silo Door with this code:

Enter the Silo.

Go to the "look in here" on the right.  Break the camera.
Go to the next "look in here" on the right.  Break the camera.
Go back then check out the large door.  Break the camera.

Go back then check out the large window.  Break the camera.
Look throgh the large window.

Go to the first door on the right - the red door.
Use the red crytal key on the door.

Enter the door.

Break the camera.

Look at the shelf.  Open the case and take the 3rd battery and microscope slide.

Open the secret panel to the left of the shelves:

Take the 4th battery
Open the secret panel to the right of the shelves and take the datapad 4.

Go out then enter the second room on the right (using the green key)

Break the 2 cameras.
Talk to the man.

Go out and use the microscope to sort out the slide. (DNA 4)

Look at Datapad 4. Exit code for me s 9121
Go to the screen and enter the exit code:

Go to the exit door and exit...

Take the blue crystal key.
Go back.

Enter the silo room then enter the red door.
Zoom in on the sphere.
Zoom in again:

Insert the blue- and orange crystal keys.
Insert the four batteries (use the 4 batteries on the right hand side)
Take the laser cutter.

Zoom in on the red-white circle on the right.

Use the laser cutter and shoot the alien.  Repeat a few times and you will kill the alien.

Take the aliens head.

Go out and Zoom in on the large door.
Open the door by scanning the aliens head on the scanner.

Exit through the opened door.

Go forward.

Use the laser cutter and kill the alien ship.  You need to shoot it a couple of times before it will break.

Go forward.

"This place just gets weirder and weirder!  Now Ive killed two humans and several aliens in my bid to escape. But it seems if a man like the savage cant do it what chance do I have?  Things are coming back to me, the name Venus Callahan sparked off a million memories, images flooding my mind.  Itll tale time to process...  The observer is obviously the key here!  If I can find and kill him perhaps I can discover a way off this ship and get some form of safety.  What of those beings the savage talked about?  I must discover more about them.  For now, I am happy to have survived until this point."


Well done on completing Killer Escape III.
I hope you enjoyed my walkthrough.

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